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©2004-2009 ~Reimaru
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A portrait of a Korean girl. No idea who it is, since it was a picture I came across on the net, but... (-_-; Kinda screwed up on her right shoulder... Could've done better with her hair. Got lazy after a couple hours... :p (as usual)
Anyway, I decided to draw another portrait, because I thought this girl was beautiful. :)

EDIT: Okay, finding way too many mistakes. I think I'll work on this pic a bit more tomorrow or something.... (-_-)>

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:iconreimaru:
Hmmm now that I look at it, I drew her right eye a bit too far apart...
Why do I notice mistakes once I finish...? (>_<;
:iconlilboy:
Whoa~~!!

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:iconlilboy:
Um... The ear is blur. And the right eye is a lil far...
It would be better if the left side of her face gets more shading...
You seem to only focus on hair and face. Therefore the rest of the body seem blur... but that's just my opinion...
Other than that, It's quite a nice picture, especially the lips. ;D

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:iconreimaru:
lol thanks for the critique. :)
You got me on "focusing on the face" part, but I didn't focus on her hair very much. :p
Actually... Once I drew the face, I got lazy overall. (-_-;
I don't think I'll fix up this pic, but I'll keep the stuff you mentioned in mind.
Thanks! :D
:iconlilboy:
Haha~ Welcome!!!
I was worried that I'll get flamed after commenting so much, and posting twice...

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:iconreimaru:
lol What? ^o^;
People out there flame others for commenting a lot, or posting twice...?
Not me man. I appreciate your critique. ^^
And post as many times as you'd like. :)
:iconlilboy:
Heh, if you were to see my pics, I sincerely hoped that you'll criticize harshly... ;)

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Lilboy's Theorem of Art Replication: All forms of art can be identically replicated, with the right conditions (medium, willpower, perserverance, etc.) and resources (time, food, health, etc.).
:iconreimaru:
lol I already added a pic of yours to my favorites, and all I left was nothing but compliments... ^^;
Don't throw any rocks at me yet! I'll see what I can do in the future!! XD
:iconlilboy:
*crouches and picks a rock* XD
Thanks for trying~ :)

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Lilboy's Theorem of Art Replication: All forms of art can be identically replicated, with the right conditions (medium, willpower, perserverance, etc.) and resources (time, food, health, etc.).

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